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Palina htf by ChicaSuperKiller Palina htf by ChicaSuperKiller
good ?
me Palina
Bear with me, this is my first ever critique, so it may be a little dodgy! Overall, this is an adorable piece of work! The hair naturally falls and the colours interact with each other with such vibrancy. Anatomy is correct and this is a wonderful effort considering this was done on MS Paint, I'm presuming. Her figure is nothing over-the-top like some HTF OC's. This is also quite calming to look at. Perhaps a little bit of shading could've helped it along? Other than that this is wonderful. What else can I really say? This is absolutely adorable!
-Bella ^^
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
4 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

Overall I suppose this is alright.
The lines are a bit off (like near her tail and hair), The pupils of the eyes are curvy near the ends. The colors are nice, I like her hair. The star is just a lack of effort no offense. The body could use a little bit of work. The skirt is too high up. Guidlines may help you like they have to me. The body could be much easier with guidlines. It could be a more of an HTF body. I support it doesn't have watermelon boobs. Overall it's alright (My first critique)
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brent-roswell Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome job :D
BlackFoxAsakura Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Wygląda uroczo. Doskonała robota.
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